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That was simple beautiful.... eloquently written....
and filled with such emotion that my own poems can't even come close to capturing....
Wonderful....
quiet insignificant conversations
which you
let fall by the wayside" - very true, I think. Well written
great poem, wonderful words
.
"I will
cherish worthless keepsakes
sediment
on the beach of time, made precious
by remembered moments
quiet insignificant conversations
which you
let fall by the wayside, as you
swept along with life's blithe current
leaving me behind."
Beautiful!
love the way this is written.....it really moves in a powerful way.